Sunday, September 2, 2012

~God has another plan~


I opened my eyes
slowly, slowly...
I wished you'd be here
near me, holding my hand

Everything was so dark
and calm and quiet
Something is wrong
said my mind...

There was a light
yellow and bright
I'm no longer lying
I floated gently..

 I floated through an arch
to a meadow very bright
"Am I out this much soon?"
a question in my mind..

Looked everywhere for u
to see your bright smile
you weren't here, but
a beautiful world..

Something is not right
mumbling in my head
"where are you and my son?"
more stress in my mind

Nobody seems anywhere
"could someone hear me?"
It's beautiful world
but don't want to stay here

I looked back at
the arch which I entered
It was no longer there
only me and silent everywhere..

Slowly floated myself
around the meadow
felt this is the end
No going back there

Finally saw you and him
cuddled together in pain
"don't worry I'm fine"
I screamed but no-one seems hear

They took me my body, not me
"I'm still here" whispered to your ear
"Seems god has another plan,
Tell him I love, and will forever.."


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Posted by Red Riding Hood at 10:13 PM
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23 comments:

  1. රොබින්September 2, 2012 at 10:44 PM

    its really awesome RED .... I tried to read it casually. it didn't work. I couldn't stop my tears falling from my eyes..

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    1. Red Riding HoodSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:41 AM

      :) Then my poem is really successful... to be honest when I wrote the verse I have no idea what I'm going to write.. but then it slowly comes to me.. thanx Robin..

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  2. Ocean of Emotions - සිතුවිලි සයුරSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:18 AM

    this is great!

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  3. nvscreationsSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:37 AM

    ආයෙ දෙකක් නෑ සුපිරියි!! superb!! red,


    They took me my body, not me
    "I'm still here" whispered to your ear
    "Seems god has another plan,
    Tell him I love, and will forever.."

    I like this lines

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    1. Red Riding HoodSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:42 AM

      hehe.. Thank you Nipuna.. :)
      yeah those are like the hope in that poem..

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  4. DineshSeptember 3, 2012 at 3:06 AM

    නියමයි රෙඩ්..

    සිංහලෙන්නම් ඕන එකක්.. කඩුවෙන් නම් පිළිතුරු කවි බෑ.. :)

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    1. Red Riding HoodSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:43 AM

      හිහිහි..කියෙව්ව එකම වටිනවා දිනේශ් අයියේ.. අපේ කට්ටිය වැඩිය කඩ්ඩ කියවන්න ආස නැනේ..

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2012 at 8:12 AM

    Nice One Ya! :)

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  6. MalyaSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:10 AM

    really good one!

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  7. සොඳුරු සඳවතී September 3, 2012 at 6:10 PM

    wow...... really v.nice

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  8. තොටියාSeptember 3, 2012 at 8:33 PM

    [ma]A Good one Red...! Really Nice...[/ma]
    Just saw ur signature at the end of the poem.. Written in blood ah?

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    1. Red Riding HoodSeptember 3, 2012 at 9:15 PM

      hehe Thank you very much..
      yeah do u want to know the way??? :)
      it is in a blog "Sanjaya සිතුවිලි"

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  9. Sukhitha Srimal BulathinghalaSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:10 PM

    nice one..:))

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  10. කසුන්September 4, 2012 at 8:21 AM

    awesome

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  11. oshaniSeptember 4, 2012 at 9:57 PM

    nice poem darl..luv it

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