 |
| Pic- Google |
I want to hold you close
so you wouldn't get hurt
protect you from cold
and keep your heart warm...
I want to stay next to you
when you fall asleep
protect you from bad dreams
and let you sleep on my arms...
I want to walk with you
hand in hand together
protect you from piercing wind
and give strength to walk...
I want to hold your hand
say everything is alright
protect you from falling apart
and never let you cry...
I don't want to let you go
even, I'm not there anymore
I'll always be by your side
even, you don't see me anymore..
Nice creation.
ReplyDeleteIf I were you I would make some changes to the third verse.
I want to walk with you
by hand in hand together
protect you from piercing wind
and give strength to walk...
I'd remove 'by' in second line
replace piercing with 'biting'
Well that is my personal choice.
Well done Red.
hey thanx for the comment.. :) and maybe i should remove "by" in that stanza..
DeleteOne more thing to make it even better. What about adding 'the' before piercing?
Delete