It seems like this is the end..
nothing more to wait for
you have pushed me away..
faraway..
nothing more to pray for
it seems the game is over
the game of love..
I tried my best
to fit into your world..
but something didn't work out..
you were there..
I was there..
but we weren't there..
there wasn't us..
anytime in history...
everything is over
it seems like this is the end..
I started living a half life
since the day you pushed me
away..
now I'm used to it
living as a missing piece..
no way to go
no place to fit in..
A missing piece from world..
It seems like this is the end..
The End for me...
Nice... but I don't like your last line...
ReplyDeletemmm.. Thank u.. do u think that I shouldn't have write that line?? does it effect the quality of the poem??
Deletenice thought... really like this one Red..
ReplyDeleteThank u Dinesh aiya.. :)
DeleteIt seems like this is the end..
ReplyDeletenothing more to wait for
you have pushed me away..
faraway..
nothing more to pray for
it seems the game is over
the game of love..
nice...bt i dnt like the hidden meaning of diz.....
hahaha... Thank u thank u.. :p shooting me with my own words huh.. hikz.. :D
DeleteAnyway.. at the end.. This z a fantastic poem.. i rlly like it akki... :D
ReplyDeleteThank u darling.. :)
DeleteFantastic.
ReplyDeleteBut why are we reading suicide notes in most of the young girls' blogs these days? :O
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hehe.. :) this is not a suicide poem.. this is just saying about an end of a chapter.. ;) and I'm hoping to write about the new beginning very soon.. :D thank u bro..
DeleteThat is not the end...I think that is the begining. Because for the name of love, we should't suffer thinking of missed love.
ReplyDeletepeople may come, people may go, but some people stay with us all the life time though they went away. but we should face the reality..."Out of sight out of mind"....so finally "Time" will heal all the injuries of life.
:) this is the end of a one period..hehe.. thank u Pathum..
DeleteI think you are enjoying poems which creates self pity. You are questioning your own mind but don't indulge too much in your own problems and try to see the goodness of it.
ReplyDelete:) mmm.... yeah you are right mam.. but sometimes it is hard not to write about some emotions.. because this is the only way I can reduce my pain.. and all i expect from others is that read it as another poem.. :) the truth is most of my poems are not my experiences.. hehe.. thank u very much..
DeleteNice One Red!
ReplyDeleteThank you Hiru.. :)
Deleteyou were there..
ReplyDeleteI was there..
but we weren't there..
:) thanx friend..
DeleteI started living a half life
ReplyDeletesince the day you pushed me
away..
now I'm used to it
living as a missing piece..
you will find the best piece for you akka.. let it go..coz it's not belong to you.. there will be a day that he suffer without you.. but you don't care about him, don't give any chance for him. coz now you have begun a new life. new life MUST be with the new piece sis..
good luck...
yeah I hope so.. :D
Deletethank you for the comment sis..